Sunday, January 29, 2017

Shawna M.

Pets Are Allowed! by Shawna M.

Sally went on a field trip to the zoo with her classmates.  They saw rabbits, dogs, lizards, monkeys, and so on.  When Sally came home, she asked her parents if she could have a pet, the answer was negative.  Sally stated that pets make people feel more ecstatic, improve health benefits, and they make people less prone to allergies or asthma. Clearly, families should have pets in their households.

Do you have children who you long to make happy?  If so, you can get them a pet of their dreams! Family Pets can help you or your children experience low blood pressure and or better cognitive/communication gains.  When you play with your pet they can increase the levels of serotonin and dopamine in your brain (Dolmage).  Serotonin and dopamine are chemicals that make people feel happier.

Need a friend that will make you happy by improving your health benefits? If so, get a pet. Not only do pets make you happy, they also lower high levels of cholesterol and triglycerides (cholesterol and triglycerides up your risk of heart disease). Your furry friends also keep you up and moving! A study by NIH showed that people who took their dogs out regularly had more physical stamina (Humana).

A-choo!! Do you have allergies like me? If you do... get a pet!  Pets make you less prone to allergies by 33%.  Pets do this by improving your immune system and decreasing the allergens in your body (Mccandless).

Some argue that pets cost way too much.  However, if people take good care of them, money won't be much of a problem.  For example, not taking care of a home pet can lead to taking them to the vet! This situation is like buying really expensive stuff for your wants or needs.  If people don't get a pet, they will miss out on being way more healthy. Additionally, people might experience loneliness some point in their lives.  Clearly people need pets in their households.







1 comment:

  1. I appreciate how you really made it sound persuasive and how you made it sound like a professional article and how you used so many facts to pull the reader in.

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