Unlimited Benefits by Selah S. “The number one benefit, of information on technology, is that it empowers people to do what theywant to do. It lets people be creative, productive, and they can learn things that they have never known before. So, in a sense it is all about potential” (Palmer). Being on technology is a great thingto do, and should not be a problem for kids. It is making us smarter, and it is making us more adjusted to our surroundings.
The fact of having technology, is to use it when we have questions about things. When we are curious, we count on Google to have the answers. We need to be straightforward and not be shy with the things we are confused about. Some people might think Googling something gives you wrong information, but all that is needed to avoid that is teaching kids how to find good information using Google searches. Technology has become the most important thing during 2016. If technology is used correctly, it will make other kids more ready for the future and they will know how to use it more responsibly as they go forward into adulthood (Meredith).
You know technology right? We use it to help us with the problems we encounter in life. It makes life easier. Could you imagine life if we did not have it? We better acknowledge it before it turns into something different in the future. We should never have doubts on allowing time for technology because it is the key to solving problems (Mims).
Can you think of solving problems without technology? We use it everyday and we must know how it changes, as it changes, so that we are not left behind. If it keeps changing, and we're not ready, then we will be clueless and not know what to do if we get stuck. Technology has to be our first priority. It has been around for a while and some people still don't know how to use it. So, we need to make sure everyone learns it and that they can teach their children so that the information life cycle continues.
Some people might say that kids should have a certain amount of time on their technology. However, if we allow technology to be used more, then young kids learn how to use sites more maturely and wisely. For example, if a kid is on technology for a limited time, then they might miss out on opportunities to learn new things and teach those new things to other people.
Children who do go on technology might be the future scientists of the world. So embrace it and let young children be on their devices.
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