Sunday, January 29, 2017

Dawson F.

Let's Get a Pool by Dawson F.

Jesse just came home from work at 1:00pm in the afternoon.  The sun is blazing and it is very hot and she has some spare time.  No one was home and she had an idea.  She ran outside and bushhh! A big splash!  After a half an hour in the new pool, she became so relaxed that she almost forgot to pick up the kids.  She was tired because in the pool you make your muscles leaner and stronger.  Pools can be beneficial in a number of ways.  Therfore, people should have pools.

How can families improve their bonding time?  A well know writer once said, "Well if you get a pool then it is a fun and relaxing place to spend time"(Gibson).  Have a pool in your own backyard gives you access to a fun time all the time.  Swimming pools are great for both kids and adults.

Also, if you get a pool then you can build leaner muscles.  Another thing is that you will keep your heart rate up when you swim.  Also, swimming lets you work out your lung muscles.  With a pool in your backyard, you will not only have fun, but you will be leaner and stronger (Kostich)!

If people don't get a pool then they will miss out on all the good memories that can be made with people.  Additionally, if people get a pool they you will learn new things about people and make great memories.  This means that everyone should get a pool.

Some argue that a pool is too expensive.  If it is too expensive, then just install a smaller pool; everyone would still be happy.  With a pook, the kids and parents will get out of the house more and have a place to party.  Another thing is that a pool is a good looking addition to your house.

With all the stuff I told you about getting a pool, why shouldn't anyone get a pool?  It will make you stronger and fitter.  You will met new people and all that good stuff.  Clearly you should get a pool and not think about the cost, instead, just have fun.






1 comment:

  1. i agree that everyone should have a pool because its fun and i agree that it strengthens your muscles

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