Sunday, January 29, 2017

Kydyn N.


Everyone Should Eat Ice-cream


One day a boy came back from a long day of school.  Once he got home, he ate a bowl of ice cream and he was ready to do his homework.  People should eat ice-cream because it provides a great source of calcium.  Also there's even ice-cream for vegans, so if you know somebody that's a vegan tell him or her that there's ice-cream for vegans too.  Ice-cream is cool and very refreshing so when it's a hot day you can just eat ice cream to keep you cool.

Everyone should eat ice cream because ice-cream can provide a person with a number of health benefits.  First, ice-cream can provide a person with energy.  Energy is good because if you don't have that much energy in your body, you won't be able to do many things. Ice- cream can provide you vitamins.  The vitamins ice cream provides you are: vitamin A, B-6, B-12, C and D ("10 Reasons Why Ice-cream Is The Best Dessert Ever").  Ice cream is also a great source of calcium.  Calcium is good because if you want muscles you need to have calcium in your body.

Everyone should eat ice cream because there are ice-cream options for all different people.  For example, ice-cream can come in frozen yogurt, sorbets, gelatos and many more.  There's even ice cream for vegans ("The 20 Reasons Why Ice-cream is Better Than Every Other Dessert in the World").  It's good to have ice- cream for vegans because if you have a family member or somebody you know that is a vegan you can tell them that there's ice cream for vegans so they don't have to miss out on eating ice cream. There's also ice cream that doesnʻt have sugar in it.

Everyone should eat ice cream because ice cream can make you cool.  This is good because if it's a hot sunny day you can eat ice-cream and it will cool you down.  Ice-cream can also prevent blood clotting.  Ice cream can also help you with a sore throat (Hannah). This is helpful because if you have a sore throat you can just eat ice cream and if you don't have ice-cream you can just buy ice-cream from the store because ice-cream is cheap.

Some people might say that there's too much sugar in ice-cream.  However, the key is moderation. For example, eating too much ice-cream in a single day can make you gain weight.  But it doesnʻt mean people should stop eating ice-cream.  Instead, it means that you should eat one serving a day. There's also ice-cream that doesn't have sugar in it.  One brand that offers a no sugar alternative is "Breyers."

If people do not eat ice-cream, then they're missing out on all the good things about ice-cream. Additionally, people will have more energy to do extra stuff. Clearly people need to eat more ice- cream.




3 comments:

  1. I agree with you and disagree because ice cream is a delicious treat that cools you down but, eating ice cream can come with lots of unhealthy things because ice cream is also very high in sugar. And if you eat too much sugar it can lead to weight gain. To make your essay more convincing you can add different facts about it and not repeating the same information.

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  2. I disagree because ice cream also has a bad side and can cause an itchy eye

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  3. I appreciate how you take the side of ice cream. I did not know of all these things.

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