Wednesday, January 25, 2017

Kenui K

There was a boy named Ben. He was an active person, so he played many sports. But, he only had his small backyard to practice and play with friends when they came over. So, nobody ever came over to his house to play. Big backyards have lots of benefits and this is where kids can express themselves by playing sports or creating new things. One source says it well,I grew up playing music and enjoying good food, friends and family in my own backyard (Atkins).

A big yard has many benefits. Some benefits are you can make a lot of cool things. Another is that mowing the lawn can be a good exercise (Andrews). Some people argue that a big yard means that it might get messy because of all the toys and other stuff, but that's why there should be rules about cleaning the yard after you play outside. Something else that people might argue about is that it costs too much. But, if you have a bigger yard then you can use the space as a way to have a grill or store things.

Other reasons why a big yard is good is that you spend more time outside. With all of this outdoor space, people can camp or swim in a pool with friends and maybe play sports like soccer or football("Backyard Courts and Home Gyms"). Some people might argue that their children donʻt play outside as much, but that's why! people should do more family activities outside. Another thing that people might argue is: why spend so much money if we have a small family? That's why people invite relatives or friends over for a play date or a sleepover.

The last reason why a big yard is good is that kids can express themselves. Like if they have a big imagination, then they can use a play area to play and have fun. Or, if they are very active then they can use the backyard as a time waster ("Ditch the Indoors"). People might argue that their children don't have an imagination. However, you don't need an imagination to have fun outside. That's why people play with friends and or family memebers.

If people have a big back yard they can do lots of stuff like camp, make a pool, and have a fun time together.



2 comments:

  1. I agree because kids need a lot of room to run around.

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  2. Something you might consider is stating the point of the article and also put a title. Also, indent your paragraphs.

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