Sunday, January 29, 2017

Rycen D.

A Pool Is Important by Rycen D.

Joshua was working hard during his football game.  He was so stressed because they had lost four years in a row.  As he went home, he was acting all agitated because of the game.  His mom told him that he could play games, but he told her that he didn't want to.  All he wanted to do was relax.  So, instead he went home and took a swim in the family pool.  Suddenly his attitude started to get better. Many people don't know that it has been proven that a swimming pool helps you relieve stress, improves your health, and it can bring families together. It is important that families have swimming pools.

All families are stressed out when they come home from work or school.  However, pools can help.  In fact, research shows "Like any regular exercise, pool workouts are great stress relievers ("The Benefits of Water Aerobics").  Swimming can also help relieve your stressed muscles (Logan).  This is a great opportunity for people of all ages to help relieve stress.

Some people are always trying to stay in shape, but they keep getting tired so they can't do it everyday.  In fact research shows that "Having a backyard pool gives you access to numerous ways of keeping in shape" (Logan).  It could help you burn numerous amounts of fat in just minutes. This is a great way to stay active and lose weight at the same time.

A pool can also be a great way for people to bond with each other("Top 10 Benefits of Swimming Pools".  For example, families can use a pool to get fresh air together. Or, pools can also be a great place to have birthday parties.  Parents can teach their kids to swim at a young age.  Families might even discover hings that they didn't know about each other during their family time out in the pool together.  In fact, studies show that it gets harder to teach kids how to swim when they're older.

Some people may say that it's too expensive and it costs too much.  However, many of these same people have money to buy flat screen TVs, xbox ones, and even stuff they don't need.  Just of March 08,2016 32 million TVs were sold and even more TVs are still getting bought.  Not everyone should stop buying TVs, but they should just stop spending so much money on things that they don't need.  Instead they should limit themselves to what they buy and be wise with their money.  A pool is a wise investment because families will spend more time together and get exercise.

If people don't get a pool they will miss out on the opportunity to bond with each other and maybe learn things they never knew before.  Also they will miss out on having better health.How long are you going to wait?  So go to the stores and get a pool so you don't miss out on this opportunity.




2 comments:

  1. I agree because pools can cool you down and itʻs refreshing.

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  2. I agree that people are spending to much money on things they don't need.

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